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The Night Is Coming

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Nekalah
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The Night Is Coming

Post  Nekalah on Wed Mar 14, 2012 4:35 am

the night is coming
i feel so alone.

you are lost to me
but never forgotten.

i feel so cold
i could never be worm.

i am dieing inside
from all the hate you have caused.

i hate my life
and the love i feel.

don't mistake my kindness
for a weakness.

don't mistake my love
for blandness.

don't underestimate me
that will be your down fall.

hate me if you want
i don't care.

I'll hate you
if i really gave a damn.

don't come back
if you walk out that door.

their will be no more love
for you to come home to.

my heart is closed
my mind is turned away.

you'll never bring me down
cause i never think of you again.

I'll never bag you to stay
so go if it makes you feel better.

jest to let you know
i'll never take you back.


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Re: The Night Is Coming

Post  alyssalucis on Wed Mar 14, 2012 11:37 am

it's so intense and raw. your style is honest and wonderful, haunting too.
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Re: The Night Is Coming

Post  princesspissy on Wed Mar 14, 2012 6:32 pm

very raw indeed, i loved it I love you
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Re: The Night Is Coming

Post  Nekalah on Mon Mar 26, 2012 8:32 pm

thank you both it means a lot to me


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